Welcome to my blog, I'm a student at Kaniere School on the West Coast in New Zealand.
Wow Madden! Have you read your recount out loud? If you did, you would have needed to take a big breath to begin with, as I think there needs to be a few more full stops! I really like your Google drawing of your rocketship.
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments.
Wow Madden! Have you read your recount out loud? If you did, you would have needed to take a big breath to begin with, as I think there needs to be a few more full stops! I really like your Google drawing of your rocketship.
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